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S.G. Cardin
Saturday, 25 April 2009
POEM - Shattered by the Light of the Moon
Mood:  energetic
Now Playing: Just finished watching "Bottle Shock" on DVD
Topic: Writing

This is a French form of poetry similiar to the Kyrielle.

 There are 16 lines, 4 quatrains.
 A refrain is in a different line each quatrain. In the 1st quatrian it is in line 1, in the 2nd quatrain, it is in line 2. in the 3rd quatrain, it is in line 3, in the 4th quatrain, it is in line 4.
 There are 8 syllables per line.
 It does not follow a set rythme scheme.


Shattered by the light of the Moon

Shattered by the light of the moon,
I dropped to the forest ground.
His words were icy and bitter.
Heartbreak's cold arrow would not come out.

I shivered, stung, pricked by ice,
shattered by the light of the moon.
Once done, my nocturnal lover
walked away, no compassion

splayed upon his face, no cold grace.
My brittle bones ached, my skin quaked,
shattered by the light of the moon.
Rejection, so cooly done rent.

Dark hours past, sunrise's twilight peeks
out over an obsidian cloud.
My doomed heart, beating still, was
shattered by the light of the moon.


Posted by sgcardin at 11:05 AM
Updated: Saturday, 25 April 2009 11:06 AM
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